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We are offering you the chance to study an undergraduate degree by part-time study for three and half years* only. A full-time undergraduate degree usually takes up to three years to complete. Our part-time intensive degrees offer as much academic content in three and half years than a standard part-time degree.

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All the qualification with little or no debt: Thames Valley University part-time intensive degree
Can’t do a full time degree for some reason? Perhaps the course is full. Or it’s too expensive. Or maybe you can’t face the big debt at the end.

Now there’s an alternative. A part time intensive degree from Thames Valley University. It gives you the same qualification, takes just six months longer than a standard three year undergraduate course, and costs a lot less. And it’s part time. So you can earn while you learn, and end your course with all the degree but little or no debt.

If you don’t see what you’re after, give me a call and I’ll see what I can find.